Needs editing. Will re-post after editing.

hmmmmmm ..kinda made me sad though.

Where are you runnin dude??:)
It is kind of sad..i didn't know that you write sad stories too:(

well , is there are lot to write,i just feel the story is flying!
Still super as always!

Sad story but quite interesting.... Is this based on a real story or a fiction?

Wow.... was waiting for this.... Once again.... Kudos to ur writing skills....living here in Northern Virginia, i was virtually walking along ur track...simply amazing...Just curious... is this story a fact or a fiction???? If fiction...i have no words for how u've successfully drafted the story with such details.... Waiting for part III!!!

Awesome story telling, no matter fiction of a fact.
Life is full of surprises, filled with tons of parasites.

sum off,
I think I know this person or somebody who is very similar to her.

Sum Off: U're driving me crazy. I demand Part III right away.

AmriT

sum off. Great writing!

Sum off,
Wow, what an excellant narration! I felt as if I am reading Truman Capote.
It made me feel sad, though I already have some reasons for misogyny to share.
Like I already said, I already knew the story of Ms. Pandey (?) until she was in Nepal but I can't be sure since you have presented so much in detail about her. I don't know too much about it.
So, if there's not any objection from anybody's part, would you mind revealing the truth, if the story is not a fiction? (Somehow I doubt it).

Thanks for the excellant read once again.

thanx for a good story again.

What an amazing story!How can anybody acted so innocent outside yet cunning in their minds?It's scary though.
Sum off,Your narration is like that of Sidney Sheldon.What a good writer you r!Keep going!

sorry,should be act instead of acted

At this point I feel compelled to disclose to you all that this is a work of fiction. I repeat this is 100% fiction. Some freaking idiot sent me a personal email saying that I should be ethical and not write real stories. I could tell everyone who you are. But I won’t. That will be unethical. But please don’t invade my privacy by sending me personal emails. If you don’t want me to write, tell me in this thread. This freaking idiot just spoiled my day.

sum off keep on wrting...your writing is so good...i will love to read more...keep it up..

lol sum off...he spoiled your day duh, well i've got an idea...read your own posting...i am sure that will bring the smile back in your face.

well anyways.waiting for Part 3.

Great stuff, sum off. Brilliant narration. I am curious to see whether Ms Pandey comes out at the victor or the vanquished.

at = as

(Sajha should allow you to edit your own posting like other sites do ... sighs)

Thanks for the great story, sum off! Keep on writing.

sajha gazer, I think Ms. pandey's character will come out to be a victor.

gr8 story.

as all stories are .. pls do keep it close to real and for "an idiot lyk me" forgive me for spoiling ur day... that's why i always say

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