I have to write a poem about love... and right now i am not in the mood for poems, so peoples please help me out!!

♥
~ashra~

well even though noone helped me, I came up with something on my own... letme know how it is!!


Sweet Baby

As I walk out the door
The sun shines on my face
I can smell the pretty flowers
I can hear the humming birds

When I see the beautiful butterfly
Blooming in the sky
It makes me feel as I am soaring high

The wind breezes through my hair
As I picture the horizon
Just a step closer
To see me and you rising

I said we were just friends
Denied that I loved you
And now my sweet baby
My dream is coming true

By;
Ashra

Its nice. may be re-think the title... i like the part with "just friends".coz' its always like this with girls (no offense) when we all know.. a guy and a girl can never be "just friends".cheers :^)

donno what you are talking about november my best friend is a girl and we never had anything and prolly wont
peace

guess i forgot to mention "single guy" and "single girl" can never be just friends... can ask anyone you like... :^)

wat is this poem all about ???????
bounce bounce ...head...

Single guy and Single Girl can be good friends but there is always one who is subconsiously in love with other or has such kind of intention(undisclosed )though:)

umm u guys please dunt make fun of my poem i wrote it in 5 mins.. it was the best i could do in that little time!!
~ashra~

love parna lagyo ki kya ho maiya ko....poem ma ali ali testai dekhe maile...he he he....

ashra, am not making fun of your poem, i even said its pretty nice.... pretty impressed if you serioulsy wrote that in 5mins. its just i was stating the simple fact. cheers :^)

thankz!! :D

hey you know love is a pain

you all would know it if you were in place of meh........

I am in love wid one gal who is 1 yrs younger than meh....... at the moment she has a great problem in her life....... her mom is sick and her mom's operation is going on..... it's not sure if her mom will survive or not...... and her father is abroad........

Well she isn't able to concentrate in her studies......... And I am here...... taking some pain of her....... wid meh........

- lost in the world rockend

hey rockend i know how you feel.. and this poem was an assignment for school... and yes i do know how painful love is... love is not always fun and games... for me love has always gave me pain and tears... im not saying thoese tears were always tears of sorrow... and one thing that always bothers me is when people say love at first sight... that is impossible, you might just be infatuated but not in love... love takes time it grows with the understanding of each other and the trust there is between the lovers... and rockend im really sorry about your girl and her problems

~ashra~

I know what is infatuation and what's LOVE.......

I would like to thankyou for understand mah problem.......

-Rockend

Man thank god i never had to write poem or will have to write it. I cant stand that shit lol too much thinking and personally a lil fruity for my taste lol. But i donno what to say about your poem ashra cuz i dont really know much about poems but by the look of it good enough for me lol
peace

I WAS CONFUSED
WALKING A ROAD LEADING NOWHERE
I WOULD LOOK AROUND
AND SEE EVERYTHING FADE AWAY

BUT SLOWLY
BIT BY BIT EVERYTHING BECAME FOCUSED
I STARTED SEEING THE FLOWERS
FEELING THE BREEZE
AND THE WARM SUN ON MY FACE
MY STEPS BECAME STRONGER

NOW THE ROAD
LEADS TO NOWHERE
BUT I KNOW
YOU ARE THERE BY MY SIDE
TO MAKE THE JOURNEY INCREDIBLE

WAS CONFUSED
WALKING A ROAD LEADING NOWHERE
I WOULD LOOK AROUND
AND SEE EVERYTHING FADE AWAY

BUT SLOWLY
BIT BY BIT EVERYTHING BECAME FOCUSED
I STARTED SEEING THE FLOWERS
FEELING THE BREEZE
AND THE WARM SUN ON MY FACE
MY STEPS BECAME STRONGER

NOW THE ROAD
LEADS TO NOWHERE
BUT I KNOW
YOU ARE THERE BY MY SIDE
TO MAKE THE JOURNEY INCREDIBLE


this is a nice poem by saksi

Colors of love

Marvel the colors in and around you
Red, white, green, and blue
Red reminds me of my aching heart
My loved ones who remain distant apart
Pure white- the color of dove
Need I say more on the symbol of love?
When at peace, all I think is blue
Dive in the ocean, only me and you
When tired, I think of lush green
Close your eyes lets enjoy our dream
Look around, do you see any color new?
Peek inside, what colors do you have in you?

if love brings pain, it is not love, it is something else. if it makes your heart ache, again, it is not love, it is something else maybe stress or jealousy but not love. love is the purest of feelings and can never hurt, can only bring smiles in our faces.

Whatever it was,
Tissue papers were pretty handy,
Sometimes she cried,
Other times she made me cry,
Oops men don't cry...

love
uuf love
no words