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Posted on 11-15-06 8:32 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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I did this for someone and i really need to know what people think of it. I am not gonna ask my friends cuz well they are friends and wont really say its bad if its bad. Soo please some one tell me if this is any good.

 
Posted on 11-15-06 10:57 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Posted on 11-16-06 1:12 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Very good.... ;)
 
Posted on 11-16-06 1:34 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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no its not good, u need to improve in different sector
Sector first that heart shape sign, now a days it su(ks.
Sector second what those wings for are u flying now a days ?
Sector third what is that yellow colour writing ? Yellow what does it mean ? yellow !!! hindu rituals need that colour of clothes when people die? did anyone really died ?
Sector fourth What are those red things there man ? what are they doing there / why are they there ?
Sector fifth What that green color is doing that ( kind of arrow ?
Sector sixth, in the begining u said u did this for someone else, u r doing this for someone else, that mean you are playing with art, u r making it dirty. What i believe is that art should be made for urself, art should be abt what u think ? what u wanna say ? u potray there. Art should be for you, then only u can be a true artist. Art should help you to reveal urself, i.e. what i think.

U need to improve big time.
 
Posted on 11-16-06 2:01 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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I also did not get a clue what this art is about...can you explain please?
 
Posted on 11-16-06 3:56 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Plz sprinkle some of ur blood over that white heart. it makes the pic come to life LITERALLY n of course becomes very very personal as well.

red ink will do too as long as the recipient doesn't know

everything else looks fine
 
Posted on 11-16-06 4:12 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Well, it is nice afterall every piece of art is priceless....but I agree with Thopa in few of his points.I think u shud be more careful with ur color selection.And is it some sad occasion or is it for good memory? To me it looks more sad and destructive.....Though am not an expert here but just giving you my opinion..
But it is a beautiful gesture and of course a great work in itself!....
 
Posted on 11-16-06 4:17 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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And yeah the words wriiten in Yellow, makes it look more like a Graffiti done on the street walls by some counterculture grps or gangs...so try to present it in more proper way if u cannot remove it from there..anyways,am so sorry...coz I know passing comments is very easy...and for an artist It is their baby......don't get discouraged...it is really nice...just a lil bit of here and there only...
 
Posted on 11-16-06 9:41 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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art without a meaning is pointless.....it wud've been better if you would explain what its tryin' to suggest!!!!yor art goes in the lines of abstractness....so nowbody's gonna know wht it potrays...it might mean a lot to u though!!
 
Posted on 11-16-06 10:09 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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The heart makes it look a lil cheesy... but good graffiti !!
 
Posted on 11-16-06 1:53 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Good start, but very dark. You might want to re-work on coloring. If you are drawing this art to express you love for somebody, it's a no no.

But again, it depends what you situation is and bla bla bla..
 
Posted on 11-16-06 3:15 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Haha lot of mix comments huh well i guess i should have worte what the art is about. Its a band AVA= Angels and Airwaves. Its a punk rock band soo didnt wanna use a lot of light colors cuz thats pretty much opposite of the band. The wings on the initials AVA represents the angel (its pretty much their logo except i put a little tweak into it by turining it into Graffiti). The letter on the bottom says ANGELS & AIRWAVES and yes it is Graffiti. See I just started doing Graffiti like a week ago and now what ever drawing i do i try to put some graffiti into it so i can practice. The heart is there because the person i am doing this for happens to worship the band lol soo you know just thought i would throw it out there.
Bokeshowre and gurudevthanks a lot for your comments i really appreacite (yes i spelled it wrong) it.
Thopa looks like you know a lot about your art and thanks for pointing out my mistakes.
Jacksparrow well the explanation is up top lol ^^^.
Disco_dancer thanks but not that crazy about art haha.
Cleo.. amm its not sad or happy its just representing the band all i can tell you is I was happy drawing it but that really doesnt have anything to do with anything.
And thanks to everyone else for telling me what i did wrong and just commenting lol cuz i am a bit rusty on the art side started drawing again after like 2 years of break soo.
 
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Here i will throw some more graffiti at you guys since i get boored in school cuz you know my senior year this is pretty much what i do in all my classes.

 
Posted on 11-16-06 3:21 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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oh the top one^^^ is back of my ID lol amm here is another one and talking about dark this is a really dark one. You know every once is a while you gotta throw out you emotions. The hand is my hand and no i dont have a tatoo of rose on my wrist.

 
Posted on 11-16-06 3:22 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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This one was just my own practice no art classes or anything. I never could draw roses soo thought i would practice soo came up with all these.

 
Posted on 11-16-06 3:23 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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And this well i saw it in my dreams i dont really remember most of em but this stuck to my head.

 
Posted on 11-16-06 3:24 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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hope ya all enjoy em i will continue to do more later anyone else got any of their art work to share?
 
Posted on 11-16-06 7:27 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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it looks like the band logo of the rock band Aerosmith.
 


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