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 The rain song
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Posted on 04-06-08 2:13 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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And the rains descended last night
some through the open windows
others through the closed doors
one by one
came those intruders of heart

and the rains danced
while the thunders cheered along
in perfect harmony at times
and patiently I listened
each of those chimes

asked I -
oh dear,
where have you been?
please come near.
smiled the rains -
come with us
and let's dance together

and the rains grew bigger
one by one
and sang their song
and i felt smaller
small as the raindrop
and so we danced
and danced all night long


 
Posted on 04-06-08 3:35 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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I like it when it rains but I love it right after it has just stopped raining...
One of the best feelings that you could ever get...Just after it has stopped raining, and the sky is all cleared up again, everything smells so fresh outside and u would want to put on your MJ's jersey, tie them shoes up, go outside and shoot some hoops...

Your poem's good too...I wish I could express myself like that...
I've been following sajha for a while now...u guys kick ass

P.S: I would change your poem's title to something else tho...Just a thought

 


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